Feedback

This is some of the written feedback I received most of the comments were good such as good fast cuts at the start made it look more professional and comments such as the advert did stick to the genre I tried to perceive which I hoped I related back to a stereotypical perfume advert because there's not a lot you can challenge and change in a perfume advert, you are just trying to make you brand aware by the public. The improvements I got to make were along the lines of using more and different types of shots while filming and re correcting the editing so it isn't as jumpy as it is shown to be.